Mission accomplished. Good work well done. Let's hope for the best....
Sunday, September 7, 2008
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Hello everyone, this is my assignment for Computer Graphics of Alpha aka Foundation year in the Faculty Of Creative Multimedia in MMU Cyberjaya. Even though this is a mere homework please feel free to comment on me however you like!
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i guess the background's an improvement from the last assignment. but the tagline's pretty cheesy, somehow micheal jackson's song keeps playing in my head, i dont think that's the desired effect right?
and the wings should look soft, not blur. maybe you could look up at how wings are drawn to symbolise power, strength, love etc and you'll be surprised to see how different they are. at the moment the wings look pretty stiff haha
It's more like "SHE is the world, WE are her children" to me. The last phrase is not so catchy. A few minor adjustments will be fair. And yea, the wings look mechanical and do not have the distinct winglike texture: soft, mild, shit. The wings should generate the thought of support, protection, embrace, govern, shits.
hi u silvos. i'll love "we are the world, and we can have children woooo!!" more. anyways, try some different brushes for the leaves for better effect. and umm.., the lamb doesnt really fit in there, though i'll have to say its the most well done thing in there. u owe me hentai for posting, isuzu.
the text should not put on top of mother earth, some where outside, and less effects applied to it. the rest of the comments count. hope with these comments (by other commentators, your good friends huh?), will make eddy a better designer in the near future. keep learning!
Hiii (: I think your drawing's pretty good but somehow I feel it could have been better! (Sorry I can't exactly say what I feel is lacking 'coz I know nuts about art >_<) But still, great job Aizen! ^^
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